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Post by osnafrank on Oct 12, 2020 20:01:23 GMT
You all did an amazing job, it`s a great story !!
The cover looks terrific. WUITIIQGUyMrvFxIgkNw
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Post by wolf on Oct 12, 2020 20:05:41 GMT
About to go read the final chapter! Been busy as all get out today!
((((((((@kurben ))))))))
Just read in the Cantina a little while ago, that you had eye surgery and other awful things going on! 😨 You've done a helluva job, Kurbie! Good for you!
Love the artwork Miss doyoulove19 !
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 12, 2020 20:16:41 GMT
Well, I just have to say, you all are a talented group of people!! We are finished with the story, a full week before the deadline!!
I have just posted Kurben's final chapter on the official story thread. Please go check it out.
It has been a pleasure working with each of you on this project! Thank you for asking me to be a part of it! I am so excited to offer it up to the rest of the board soon. Don't forget to give me your feedback on date to start.
That was great! @kurben really did a great job wrapping that up.
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Post by wolf on Oct 12, 2020 20:19:06 GMT
Daaaaamn @kurben !
You da bomb that sets the world on FIRE 🔥 WITH ART! THAT is the way to play them bones! 😄
Brilliant, magnificent denouement! And all done under great duress! Applause Kurbie! VERY fine work! .....and wonderful quote at the beginning of your final Chapter!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2020 20:20:08 GMT
Great job everyone. applouse
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Post by wolf on Oct 12, 2020 20:24:12 GMT
Oh man thekidd12 ! ......I SO get it! 😄
@kurben , you and mary can pick this up and BRING it round full circle! 😄 Oh sorry! I mean, Mary then Kurben. 😊
How and why did Jerry (Bea's dad) happen to be in the house? .....mmmm.....got an idea or two on that SURPRISE! 😄
It's all there in the Story! ("Retrace your steps, son. Remember where you have been." Phil's philosophy, on almost everything. 😄😉)
Hey Kidd! I LURVE it! 😊 Sorry, i might be stupid but where does it say that Jerry is Beas dad?? Is it ever mentioned?? I mean we learn early on that she isn't native to Stillwater Falls but we also learn that Jerry is the coach of Stillwater. Not to be picky but of ot isn't mentioned( i reread the chapters and couldn't find it) then we should leave all options open. ......and I am going to ask you, just like I asked DocPain....
"Now tell me?......just whut were so worried about!?" 😄😉
Everyone has such really great work in here. 🙂 Like I said before, it has been a pleasure and privilege to be a part of this project, and be here in these creative trenches with ALL of you.
Thank you so much everyone. 🙂
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Post by mary on Oct 13, 2020 1:04:17 GMT
Either start date looks good to me. Love the art with the house on the cover. And thank you for putting up with us. I really enjoyed the project.
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Post by mary on Oct 13, 2020 1:59:45 GMT
kurben, Great job! You have a flair with writing and with such imagination. Reminds me of Randall Flagg's last few minutes.
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Post by thekidd12 on Oct 13, 2020 2:36:15 GMT
kurben, impressive job on the last chapter. As a matter of fact you nailed a few of the things I had in mind when I chunked the "monkey wrench" in. I want to thank all for letting me participate in this digital adventure. Everyone did their best and it is interesting to watch how people express themselves as well as interpret what others have laid foundations for. A special thanks to doyoulove19 for what had to be a tough job. Also want to shout out to wolf our resident cheerleader, prodder, cajoler, and apparently habitual drinker, for keeping everyone on task. One day girl you have to show us those pom poms. It has been a pleasure being part of this experience.
And now I shall retreat back to my world of smarmy comments and occasional lurking...
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Post by thekidd12 on Oct 13, 2020 2:45:41 GMT
One more thing...
Just clicked on the cover art (which is great by the way)...
Is it bad that I am happy my name comes before wolf on the cover???
See already back to smarmy...
Goodnight all...
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2020 7:44:57 GMT
When it comes to the cover art: It is great!!! Great job, DoYou. As for starting date.... I go with the majority but i think it would be nice with a chapter a day approach and end on the 31,st. One thing i thought of though, and i'm sure DoYou already thought of it, when we start publishing we should create two threads. One for the story and nothing else and one for comments, appluase and accolades of the story.
Also, it has been Fun, in big letters, to take part. Thanks to all of you for making it so. And thanks for all the positive response to my efforts.
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Post by wolf on Oct 13, 2020 14:36:37 GMT
kurben, impressive job on the last chapter. As a matter of fact you nailed a few of the things I had in mind when I chunked the "monkey wrench" in. I want to thank all for letting me participate in this digital adventure. Everyone did their best and it is interesting to watch how people express themselves as well as interpret what others have laid foundations for. A special thanks to doyoulove19 for what had to be a tough job. Also want to shout out to wolf our resident cheerleader, prodder, cajoler, and apparently habitual drinker, for keeping everyone on task. One day girl you have to show us those pom poms. It has been a pleasure being part of this experience.
And now I shall retreat back to my world of smarmy comments and occasional lurking... Awwww.....thanks so much Kidd. That really is nice of you!
....well at least we know where you are and what you're up to for now! 😄😉
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Post by wolf on Oct 13, 2020 15:30:02 GMT
As expected, Kurben has done an amazing final chapter. He's working on some slight revisions but we should have it all wrapped up soon. Stay tuned.
Two open items - 1) do we want to publish for the public on weekdays (so Chapter 1 on 10/19, then finish with Chapter 10 on 10/30) or start on 10/22 and finish on 10/31 2) what do you think of this for our cover?
Yes! Beautiful job on the cover art, Miss doyoulove19 ! Love the Silver and gold colors, and especially love that script/font you chose. Great job on that and being our Editrix goddess! 😊
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Post by mary on Oct 13, 2020 15:33:27 GMT
kurben, impressive job on the last chapter. As a matter of fact you nailed a few of the things I had in mind when I chunked the "monkey wrench" in. I want to thank all for letting me participate in this digital adventure. Everyone did their best and it is interesting to watch how people express themselves as well as interpret what others have laid foundations for. A special thanks to doyoulove19 for what had to be a tough job. Also want to shout out to wolf our resident cheerleader, prodder, cajoler, and apparently habitual drinker, for keeping everyone on task. One day girl you have to show us those pom poms. It has been a pleasure being part of this experience.
And now I shall retreat back to my world of smarmy comments and occasional lurking... thekidd12, I thought your writing was excellent. I just had a knee-jerk reaction making me feel out on a limb without a net. I re-read your chapter several times and have to admit you did a great job. Sorry for my behavior.
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 13, 2020 15:38:11 GMT
So, if everyone agrees i`ll publish the first part on october,22nd ??
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Post by thekidd12 on Oct 13, 2020 15:54:45 GMT
[quote author="@ma...[/font][/quote]thekidd12, I thought your writing was excellent. I just had a knee-jerk reaction making me feel out on a limb without a net. I re-read your chapter several times and have to admit you did a great job. Sorry for my behavior. [/quote]
I have never had a problem with honesty.,,
It was a monkey wrench on purpose...
A certain writer I enjoy reading often does similar things...
You don’t need to apologize....
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Post by prufrock21 on Oct 13, 2020 16:39:56 GMT
As expected, Kurben has done an amazing final chapter. He's working on some slight revisions but we should have it all wrapped up soon. Stay tuned.
Two open items - 1) do we want to publish for the public on weekdays (so Chapter 1 on 10/19, then finish with Chapter 10 on 10/30) or start on 10/22 and finish on 10/31 2) what do you think of this for our cover?
I think starting on the 22nd and ending the 31st is fine.
I like that as the cover.
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Post by prufrock21 on Oct 13, 2020 16:40:28 GMT
Nice cover. Devilishly creepy.
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Post by doyoulove19 on Oct 13, 2020 17:55:42 GMT
So, if everyone agrees i`ll publish the first part on october,22nd ?? That sounds like the consensus, Frank! We need one thread on the public board that is for this story only - ie: you or a moderator can post the cover and chapter 1 on 10/22. Then a new chapter each day. I am attaching a corrected picture of the cover since I forgot to clear up the sguiggly red spell check lines!
Then we can create a story Comments thread, like Kurben mentioned for all to post on. I'm excited!!
Thank you all so much!!!
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Post by doyoulove19 on Oct 13, 2020 17:57:37 GMT
One more thing...
Just clicked on the cover art (which is great by the way)...
Is it bad that I am happy my name comes before wolf on the cover???
See already back to smarmy...
Goodnight all... Alphabetical order! snicker
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