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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 7, 2020 18:42:14 GMT
"Koan-like"
The snowflake falls;
in its spiral for truth,
can it do otherwise?
The sky at night is
like the puddle in the road.
The closer you look,
the darker it grows.
Water buffaloes:
are you aware that
the farmer in the fields,
he also labors?
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Post by wolf on Aug 7, 2020 19:09:15 GMT
The snowflake falls; in its spiral for truth, can it do otherwise? The sky at night is like the puddle in the road. The closer you look, the darker it grows. Water buffaloes: are you aware that the farmer in the fields, he also labors?
That is so beautiful!
I have missed your poetry, and so glad to see this. 
I'm sorry that your original poetry thread just kinda got taken over by everyone else!
May I rename this thread something like "Prufrocks Poetry" or anything else you would prefer?!?
Please?And it will be kept just for YOUR work. 😊
I hope you say yes!
And sign your work too!
I think it's just good practice.
I will put whatever signature to this new poem "Koan-like" that you want me to, if you would like that.
(....that reminds me, I've been needing to ask wolfbear, the same thing about signing his poems for him.)
Please bring more! When you can! .....and thanks so much for sharing your writing with all of us! 😊
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 7, 2020 21:56:46 GMT
OK to rename. And thanks for the praise.
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Post by osnafrank on Aug 7, 2020 22:07:05 GMT
OK to rename. And thanks for the praise.
So it`s ok to change the Thread Name to "Prufrocks Poetry" ?
Only if you like it !! |
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Post by wolf on Aug 7, 2020 22:17:55 GMT
You are more than welcome for the praise prufrock21, it is very deserved! 🙂
osnafrank?....I think maybe that's okay until, he tells us otherwise. 🙂
If you want to change it now, then add in the title "Koan-like" at the top of his first post.
Whatever you think is best Commander. 😊 
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 8, 2020 14:06:21 GMT
You are more than welcome for the praise prufrock21 , it is very deserved! 🙂
osnafrank ?....I think maybe that's okay until, he tells us otherwise. 🙂
If you want to change it now, then add in the title "Koan-like" at the top of his first post.
Whatever you think is best Commander. 😊  OK to change.  |
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Post by wolf on Aug 8, 2020 14:31:00 GMT
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 8, 2020 22:12:33 GMT
Welcome.
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Post by wolf on Aug 8, 2020 22:15:33 GMT
You want your signature to be "welcome"!?
Lol, 😊 😉
....I suppose "Prufrock's Poetry" is signature 'nuff. 😊 😉
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 12, 2020 22:07:27 GMT
Prufrock's Poetry is fine.
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 25, 2020 20:16:58 GMT
Hours
When I leave
I'll do you one better:
To check my watch
so I can remember
the time we had together.
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Post by wolf on Aug 25, 2020 21:48:30 GMT
Hours When I leave
I'll do you one better:
To check my watch
so I can remember
the time we had together. |
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Post by prufrock21 on Aug 27, 2020 18:56:58 GMT
Hours When I leave
I'll do you one better:
To check my watch
so I can remember
the time we had together. |
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Post by prufrock21 on Sept 27, 2020 20:54:33 GMT
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Post by prufrock21 on Sept 27, 2020 21:04:17 GMT
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Post by wolf on Sept 27, 2020 21:23:49 GMT
I remember "Twisters In Sequence", beautiful work prufrock21! 🙂
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Post by wolf on Sept 27, 2020 21:28:32 GMT
"A Schizophrenic Young Woman"
Another great one!
I like that, very much! 😊
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Post by prufrock21 on Oct 15, 2020 19:00:55 GMT
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Post by prufrock21 on Oct 15, 2020 20:24:17 GMT
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Post by prufrock21 on Oct 30, 2020 19:28:44 GMT
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