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Post by darkharbinger on Nov 17, 2021 5:54:39 GMT
When did Thor become a woman? When my daughter lifted the hammer <button disabled="" class="c-attachment-insert--linked o-btn--sm">Attachment Deleted</button>  ...oh my god, she's adorable JB.😄  And she swings like a pro baseball player. That thing hurts lol |
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Post by docpain2 on Nov 17, 2021 10:27:58 GMT
You're welcome JB! She's a sweetie! Your only child? 😊
Hey guys,
about the Cover, illustrations and font colors (I can change those up)...etc.
This below, is something I thought of for our Cover.
Dio helped me out by putting the red and green lights in it.
(originally they were like a glowing yellow)
diobolic has been very busy lately,
and I am trying to learn an editing/photoshop program to work on,
to take the work load off of him.
I've made a little progress, but nothing I'm ready to show you guys yet.
I AM going to add in some more 'Christmas decoration accents' to it!
(Oh yeah! And the 2 illustrations in Chapter 1,
I will get around to downsizing and making much smaller.
Lol...I am sure I will be beggin' for Dio's help.💔🙂 )
Y'all tell me what you think,
if you like this background for our Cover, or not.
AND the colors of font. Please. 🙂
docpain2
diobolic
darkharbinger
edwardjohn
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 17, 2021 10:29:36 GMT
Woo hoo, awesome opening chapter wolfie. 
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Post by darkharbinger on Nov 17, 2021 14:25:35 GMT
You're welcome JB! She's a sweetie! Your only child? 😊
Hey guys,
about the Cover, illustrations and font colors (I can change those up)...etc.
This below, is something I thought of for our Cover.
Dio helped me out by putting the red and green lights in it.
(originally they were like a glowing yellow)
diobolic has been very busy lately,
and I am trying to learn an editing/photoshop program to work on,
to take the work load off of him.
I've made a little progress, but nothing I'm ready to show you guys yet.
I AM going to add in some more 'Christmas decoration accents' to it!
(Oh yeah! And the 2 illustrations in Chapter 1,
I will get around to downsizing and making much smaller.
Lol...I am sure I will be beggin' for Dio's help.💔🙂 )
Y'all tell me what you think,
if you like this background for our Cover, or not.
AND the colors of font. Please. 🙂
docpain2
diobolic
darkharbinger
edwardjohn
Big thumbs up. Yep, my one and only |
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Post by wolf on Nov 17, 2021 17:01:32 GMT
Y'all tell me what you think,
if you like this background for our Cover, or not.
AND the colors of font. Please. 🙂
Big thumbs up. Woo hoo, awesome opening chapter wolfie. 
Very happy you like what we have so far. 😊 |
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Post by wolf on Nov 17, 2021 17:03:11 GMT
...oh my god, she's adorable JB.😄 And she swings like a pro baseball player. That thing hurts lol
I've just got my one boy too.😊 |
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Post by wolf on Nov 17, 2021 22:33:43 GMT
Hey y'all.
This is what I've got so far.
Been muddling through and figuring things out,
a minute here and a minute there.
Lol, I don't how I got that darker background in there,
been trying to remember and retrace my steps
(as good ol' Paw, Phil, used to say 😂😉)
I thought it was kinda cool,
and y'all might like to check it out.
I still have the lighter version saved too, if you guys prefer that one.
I've finally got the lettering down at least.
Still have a couple of more things to figure out how to put into this Cover,
Frank's "  " is one of them. 😊...lol, I love that little Kermie.
On the title :
I have one suggestion : "It's a dreadful life".
You guys come with your ideas too.
I'm still working today, but will be looking out for edwardjohn . 😊
Whenever he shows up with Chapter 2,
I will get right on it and have to you all asap. 😊
I hope everyone is having a fine Wednesday  !
edwardjohn
docpain2
darkharbinger
diobolic
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Post by docpain2 on Nov 17, 2021 23:02:27 GMT
Hey y'all.
This is what I've got so far.
Been muddling through and figuring things out,
a minute here and a minute there.
Lol, I don't how I got that darker background in there,
been trying to remember and retrace my steps
(as good ol' Paw, Phil, used to say 😂😉)
I thought it was kinda cool,
and y'all might like to check it out.
I still have the lighter version saved too, if you guys prefer that one.
I've finally got the lettering down at least.
Still have a couple of more things to figure out how to put into this Cover,
Frank's " " is one of them. 😊...lol, I love that little Kermie.
On the title :
I have one suggestion : "It's a dreadful life".
You guys come with your ideas too.
I'm still working today, but will be looking out for edwardjohn . 😊
Whenever he shows up with Chapter 2,
I will get right on it and have to you all asap. 😊
I hope everyone is having a fine Wednesday !
edwardjohn
docpain2
darkharbinger
diobolic
Great title! |
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Post by wolf on Nov 17, 2021 23:11:04 GMT
Cool docpain2 !
Thank you, Cap. 😊
What do you think about the cover so far?
Do you think this one is too dark?
...compared to original one.
Happy to get input from any of you guys. 🙂
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Post by docpain2 on Nov 18, 2021 11:14:50 GMT
Cool docpain2 !
Thank you, Cap. 😊
What do you think about the cover so far?
Do you think this one is too dark?
...compared to original one.
Happy to get input from any of you guys. 🙂 The cover is tricky because we are writing a "horror" story that basically turns into something dramatically different. |
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Post by wolf on Nov 18, 2021 14:00:58 GMT
Cool docpain2 !
Thank you, Cap. 😊
What do you think about the cover so far?
Do you think this one is too dark?
...compared to original one.
Happy to get input from any of you guys. 🙂 The cover is tricky because we are writing a "horror" story that basically turns into something dramatically different.
I'll fix up the other back ground cover also,
and we all can compare them and decide.
Thank you, Cap. 😊
edwardjohn ! I'm looking for YOU this morning darling! 😊
You got Chapter 2 for me to edit?
I'm ready, and really looking forward to it, kiddo. bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb
Good Thorsday everyone,
hope you all are having a good one.  |
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Post by edwardjohn on Nov 18, 2021 14:06:32 GMT
The cover is tricky because we are writing a "horror" story that basically turns into something dramatically different.
I'll fix up the other back ground cover also,
and we all can compare them and decide.
Thank you, Cap. 😊
edwardjohn ! I'm looking for YOU this morning darling! 😊
You got Chapter 2 for me to edit?
I'm ready, and really looking forward to it, kiddo. 
Good Thorsday everyone,
hope you all are having a good one. |
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Post by wolf on Nov 18, 2021 14:11:02 GMT
Yeah, I kinda thought that too.
I'll fix up the other back ground cover also,
and we all can compare them and decide.
Thank you, Cap. 😊
edwardjohn ! I'm looking for YOU this morning darling! 😊
You got Chapter 2 for me to edit?
I'm ready, and really looking forward to it, kiddo.
Good Thorsday everyone,
hope you all are having a good one.
I'm taking the day to be here and get right on it.
Thank you, Edders. 😊 |
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Post by edwardjohn on Nov 18, 2021 15:08:10 GMT
Finished.
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Post by wolf on Nov 18, 2021 15:13:49 GMT
WUITIIQGUyMrvFxIgkNw bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb Looking forward to getting your PM! 😄 |
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Post by wolf on Nov 18, 2021 15:27:23 GMT
bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb ohmygod, I just got it!
I'm on it and will get back to you asap, Edders. 😄
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Post by wolf on Nov 18, 2021 19:45:12 GMT
Gentlemen, Chapter 2 is now posted!
And our Edders has done another great job! Bravo kiddo!
I like what's there, and I am looking forward
to what may come from it! applouse bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb
We're moving a long nicely, guys.
3 more Chapters to go!
And, if all of the characters have not been killed off,
I think for an epilogue,
each of the 5 of us could take a character or pair of characters,
and write a 300 word passage about them.
If you men would like to do that.
Think on it and holler out. Please.😊
JB, Edders and Dio...
I am also looking forward to your opinions
on the 2 different Cover backgrounds also.😊
edwardjohn , you really only had a couple of typos to be fixed
so I went ahead and posted your Chapter 2.
Still, check out my last PM's to you, and have a good look at them.
Let me know if I missed anything, please sir.
And let me know about your Chapter Title and Quote.😊
Cap! You're up next, 'Bringer of the PAIN'.
Whutcha gonna do!?😄
docpain2
darkharbinger
diobolic
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Post by diobolic on Nov 19, 2021 16:57:03 GMT
I like both of your cover artworks wolf. The darker one looks more ominous, so maybe that one just a tad more. And I like the title you came up with wolf.
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Post by wolf on Nov 19, 2021 17:37:04 GMT
I like both of your cover artworks wolf . The darker one looks more ominous, so maybe that one just a tad more. And I like the title you came up with wolf .
Appreciate the input. 😊
I'll two versions of the cover
and post them both here for everyone to check out
and choose which one they like best.
Really do appreciate all your help with this stuff too, hon. 😊
I'm taking note of everything you guys tell me.
And I'll make a list.
Do you have any ideas for a title yourself, Dio? 🙂
I'm working today, but I'll be around.
Everyone have a good one! 😊
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Post by diobolic on Nov 19, 2021 17:45:57 GMT
wolf , I was thinking "Misery" might be a good title, but then found out some clown writer already took it. 
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...oh my god, she's adorable JB.😄 
" is one of them. 😊...lol, I love that little Kermie. 
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