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Post by spideyman on Oct 26, 2020 11:59:15 GMT
With docpain2's part the anxiety level rises. Excellent descriptions- the creepiness, the sights, and sounds all pop to the max. Good job!!
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 26, 2020 12:28:29 GMT
With docpain2 's part the anxiety level rises. Excellent descriptions- the creepiness, the sights, and sounds all pop to the max. Good job!! Thanks! |
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2020 18:22:31 GMT
Awesome work docpain2 ! Everything Lady spideyman said and more. 😄
.....I know what's next! But gotta be good and not say too much......let's just go with this : Things start to be more diobolic ! 😊😉
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2020 18:34:04 GMT
Docpain is creeping up the tension a few notches more. Great description of the house that gives us something to play with. Nice cliffhanger also. Great work!!!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2020 18:41:42 GMT
Awesome work docpain2 ! Everything Lady spideyman said and more. 😄
.....I know what's next! But gotta be good and not say too much......let's just go with this : Things start to be more diobolic ! 😊😉
And great job on you’re part. Your introductions and plot lines, along with Willard and docpain great advancements, gave me the basis and ideas needed to be me. I guess it's up to everyone to determine for themselves if that's a good thing or not. 😄 |
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2020 21:57:42 GMT
Awesome work docpain2 ! Everything Lady spideyman said and more. 😄
.....I know what's next! But gotta be good and not say too much......let's just go with this : Things start to be more diobolic ! 😊😉
And great job on you’re part. Your introductions and plot lines, along with Willard and docpain great advancements, gave me the basis and ideas needed to be me. I guess it's up to everyone to determine for themselves if that's a good thing or not. 😄
Thank you Dio. 🙂
I love all the work everyone has done on this great tale! 😊
It's a beautiful beast we've created for Halloween! 😄😊😉 |
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Post by spideyman on Oct 27, 2020 14:34:36 GMT
I'll make it 5 wows, instead of 5 explanation marks, diobolic. Better than good, you did great. The apprehension, stress, nervousness of your part overwhelms. Max better stay safe!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2020 14:39:09 GMT
I'll make it 5 wows, instead of 5 explanation marks, diobolic . Better than good, you did great. The apprehension, stress, nervousness of your part overwhelms. Max better stay safe!  |
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Post by spideyman on Oct 27, 2020 14:42:15 GMT
I'll make it 5 wows, instead of 5 explanation marks, diobolic . Better than good, you did great. The apprehension, stress, nervousness of your part overwhelms. Max better stay safe! You know me and critters-- |
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2020 14:52:32 GMT
Our diobolic Dio brought the thrills, chills and gore!
Really great job, Dio. 😊
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2020 15:05:52 GMT
Our diobolic Dio brought the thrills, chills and gore!
Really great job, Dio. 😊 |
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 27, 2020 15:26:34 GMT
Good job, wolf . The mystery begins to unravel.
Did the best I could.
Lol, I got a little long winded it's only as good as it is because of the great sculpting doyoulove19 , our Playground's Editrix Goddess did! 😊
prufrock21 and darkharbinger did marvelous work with Chapter's 1 and 2 !
And gave me really great stuff to work from. 😊
mary ? Dearheart, you're a little bit confused there in that post.
Prufrock gave us the wonderful setting and backstory, and some of the characters.
But remember JB, darkharbinger came up with the twins, and named them Carolyn and Sarah? 😊
And Max didn't come a long until Chapter 3.
Just saying, so anyone reading, knows that we all did this Story in the same way, same tradition of the SKMB Halloween Stories before. 😊
Hope everyone enjoys the Story! It gets better and better! 😊
I was just glad to be a part of it |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2020 4:35:14 GMT
Yes! 
@woowoo001 has brought action, twists and turns! Great work Grinny Willy! 😊
I wanted to stick Evel Knevel in there somewhere, but couldn't figure out how to do it.
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Post by thekidd12 on Oct 28, 2020 10:52:59 GMT
Yes!
@woowoo001 has brought action, twists and turns! Great work Grinny Willy! 😊
I wanted to stick Evel Knevel in there somewhere, but couldn't figure out how to do it.
Could’ve had one of the characters step on his toy stunt cycle... My brother always wanted one for Christmas... Finally I gave him one two years ago... Heard he’s still playing with it... |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2020 11:43:25 GMT
A double shot of the wolf. Great job and way to step up to the plate. 👍👻
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Post by spideyman on Oct 28, 2020 12:45:09 GMT
Thankee for picking up for Dizzy when she was in need.
wolf has laid the path deep within this venture. Anticipation runs high. Good job!!
* Thankful Max is safe within this episode.
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2020 15:34:53 GMT
Thankee for picking up for Dizzy when she was in need.
wolf has laid the path deep within this venture. Anticipation runs high. Good job!!
* Thankful Max is safe within this episode.
Did the best I could. 🙂
I was one of three volunteers, got lucky and was drawn.
You know how Mother Wolf is about dogs and kids and all animals. 😉
Had our Dizzy darlin' in mind too, while writing this.
She had great ideas on dark cellars, and ancient things hidden underground!
And wanted to give her something a little happier to read about!
@kurben gave us the ghost/haunting theme that everyone wanted to do!
prufrock21, thekidd12 and others had great ideas about the underbelly of the house in our discussions as well!
mary brought up the fact that all this was happening in one day, owe the 'right before sunset' time to her!
It was great to utilize all the awesome things the other writers had brought!
Loved how darkharbinger described the twins different personalities and the woods!
@woowoo001 's ghoulie ghost girl couldn't be ignored or forgotten!
docpain2 's tremendous breadcrumbs were a pleasure to pick up on and use!
( Forgot to mention before DocPain, when Bea knocks on the door, and Harold just looks at her saying "Really!?".....cracked me up big-time. 😄)
diobolic Dio's great details and hints about the shoulder bite, and the horrible dark entity, simply had to be continued!
Lol, it's kinda been like 'detective work's here and there. 😊
And doyoulove19 has the patience, cheerfulness and gentle iron hand of a Saint! 😊
EVERYONE in this Authors group has brought so many wonderful ideas, suggestions, writing and comaraderie!
Again, it has been a honor, a privilege and a pleasure to work on this Story with all these amazing people! Thank you everyone. 🙂
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 28, 2020 15:42:48 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2020 16:04:10 GMT
Right back atcha, Captain America. 😊
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2020 16:05:41 GMT
A double shot of the wolf. Great job and way to step up to the plate. 👍👻
Lol, we'll do double shots when I get all this Benadryl out of my system. 😄😉 |
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