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Post by osnafrank on Oct 22, 2020 8:45:05 GMT
hgmsy59 halloween-smiley26 smilie_hal_086
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2020 11:14:16 GMT
I think Prufrock did an excellent job of creating an atmosphere for us to work in. Great job. The cliffhanger is really good too.
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Post by spideyman on Oct 22, 2020 12:26:26 GMT
Excellent start to the Halloween Story, prufrock21. You have caught this readers eye.
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 22, 2020 13:01:44 GMT
Where is the story? Does anyone have a link?
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Post by spideyman on Oct 22, 2020 13:43:15 GMT
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 22, 2020 14:09:11 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2020 13:00:46 GMT
Really great beginning to the Halloween Story. Can't wait to see how it all turns out. Strange though... everything seems so oddly familiar.  
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Post by spideyman on Oct 23, 2020 14:19:46 GMT
darkharbinger has raised the spook and fear factor to the max. Great job!!!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2020 15:37:31 GMT
Second chapter builds the tension and develops story and character in a great way. Amazing job!!!
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Post by mary on Oct 23, 2020 19:57:10 GMT
I thought Chapter 1 by prufrock21 was amazing. He created 8 characters (plus the dog, Max), a back story, a haunted house and the tone for the story beginning.
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Post by spideyman on Oct 24, 2020 13:25:03 GMT
Good job, wolf. The mystery begins to unravel.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2020 17:38:34 GMT
Getting better.......... 👻😱
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2020 18:57:01 GMT
Good job, wolf . The mystery begins to unravel.
Did the best I could.
Lol, I got a little long winded it's only as good as it is because of the great sculpting doyoulove19 , our Playground's Editrix Goddess did! 😊
prufrock21 and darkharbinger did marvelous work with Chapter's 1 and 2 !
And gave me really great stuff to work from. 😊
mary ? Dearheart, you're a little bit confused there in that post.
Prufrock gave us the wonderful setting and backstory, and some of the characters.
But remember JB, darkharbinger came up with the twins, and named them Carolyn and Sarah? 😊
And Max didn't come a long until Chapter 3.
Just saying, so anyone reading, knows that we all did this Story in the same way, same tradition of the SKMB Halloween Stories before. 😊
Hope everyone enjoys the Story! It gets better and better! 😊
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2020 19:26:06 GMT
Nice little addition, Wolf!! Things start to heat up......
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2020 20:02:21 GMT
Nice little addition, Wolf!! Things start to heat up...... |
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Post by spideyman on Oct 25, 2020 12:45:08 GMT
Good job, wolf . The mystery begins to unravel.
Did the best I could.
Lol, I got a little long winded it's only as good as it is because of the great sculpting doyoulove19 , our Playground's Editrix Goddess did! 😊
prufrock21 and darkharbinger did marvelous work with Chapter's 1 and 2 !
And gave me really great stuff to work from. 😊
mary ? Dearheart, you're a little bit confused there in that post.
Prufrock gave us the wonderful setting and backstory, and some of the characters.
But remember JB, darkharbinger came up with the twins, and named them Carolyn and Sarah? 😊
And Max didn't come a long until Chapter 3.
Just saying, so anyone reading, knows that we all did this Story in the same way, same tradition of the SKMB Halloween Stories before. 😊
Hope everyone enjoys the Story! It gets better and better! 😊
She just made an obseravtion within segment 1. |
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2020 15:38:45 GMT
Thank you very much Lady!
Did the best I could.
Lol, I got a little long winded it's only as good as it is because of the great sculpting doyoulove19 , our Playground's Editrix Goddess did! 😊
prufrock21 and darkharbinger did marvelous work with Chapter's 1 and 2 !
And gave me really great stuff to work from. 😊
mary ? Dearheart, you're a little bit confused there in that post.
Prufrock gave us the wonderful setting and backstory, and some of the characters.
But remember JB, darkharbinger came up with the twins, and named them Carolyn and Sarah? 😊
And Max didn't come a long until Chapter 3.
Just saying, so anyone reading, knows that we all did this Story in the same way, same tradition of the SKMB Halloween Stories before. 😊
Hope everyone enjoys the Story! It gets better and better! 😊
She just made an obseravtion within segment 1.
And another member and I were talking about it, and agreed that her post looked a little confusing.
Some people could read that and take it like the story had been all planned out from the beginning.
It wasn't. So I made the clarification. Everyone who worked on the project stuck to the rules and we all had a wonderful time doing it. There's more great writing to come! 😊
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Post by Deleted on Oct 25, 2020 16:23:00 GMT
Grin willard strikes again!! Tension building chapter, what has happened to Sarah??? Good job!!!!
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2020 16:36:01 GMT
Yes! 
@woowoo001 has brought action, twists and turns! Great work Grinny Willy! 😊
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Post by spideyman on Oct 26, 2020 11:18:35 GMT
Apprehension is building..... good job, Grin Willard!!
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