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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 18:34:12 GMT
This is just a thought or two on Jeff Beaumont and 'the Gift'....
1. It is sooo cool that we have no idea if he will open the gift or not,
or WHEN if he does!
2. I've thought more about Luc Diaboli saying :
"That offender has one chance to amend his errors."
I just wonder if Beaumont is a good enough man to be true to his word,
when he said that he too would act 'fairly and honestly',
as he told Diaboli he would?
I just wonder...will he open it, as he has been told to more than once,
And possibly 'attain his just wages' whether they be good or bad?
Could the decision to OPEN the package, though he be fearful, be that 'one chance'?
I am SO LOOKING FORWARD to whatever comes next, in the following chapters. 
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 20:30:40 GMT
Here is this info again, if anyone needs to refer to it. 🙂.....
Chapter 1 - docpain2 (1,500 words Max.) : 10/22 - 10/25 Wolf Edits and posts : 10/26Chapter 2 - Wolf (1,500 words Max.) : 10/27 - 10/30 Edit and post : 10/31Chapter 3 - diobolic (1,500 words Max.) : 11/1 - 11/4 Wolf Edits and posts : 11/5Chapter 4 - Tanith (1,500 words Max.) : 11/6 - 11/9 Wolf Edits and posts : 11/10Chapter 5 - edwardjohn (1,500 words Max.) : 11/11 - 11/14 Wolf Edits and posts : 11/15Chapter 6 - darkharbinger (1,500 words Max. ) : 11/16 - 11/19 Wolf Edits and posts : 11/20Epilogue - Writers to be announced by 11/15 (1,500 words Max.) : 11/21 - 11/24 Edit and post : 11/25 |
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2022 17:59:33 GMT
Okay, our Halloween Story is in the process of being published!    I hope all of you are pleased with it's looksand the songs I chose for the soundtrack.🙂And onto selecting a title
for our Christmas Story! 
So far there is one suggestion that Cap docpain2 and I like :
1. "The Gift"
Like before,
everyone come with your ideas
and add to our list. 🙂
I hope to have a 'Cover Prototype'
for you guys to check out soon.
And I'll bring a post about the epilogue later.
diobolic
Tanith
edwardjohn
darkharbinger
Everybody have a great day. 🙂
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2022 23:01:14 GMT
This is just a thought or two on Jeff Beaumont and 'the Gift'....
1. It is sooo cool that we have no idea if he will open the gift or not,
or WHEN if he does!
2. I've thought more about Luc Diaboli saying :
"That offender has one chance to amend his errors."
I just wonder if Beaumont is a good enough man to be true to his word,
when he said that he too would act 'fairly and honestly',
as he told Diaboli he would?
I just wonder...will he open it, as he has been told to more than once,
And possibly 'attain his just wages' whether they be good or bad?
Could the decision to OPEN the package, though he be fearful, be that 'one chance'?
I am SO LOOKING FORWARD to whatever comes next, in the following chapters.
The names,
"Bianca Gelida" :
Bianca - Italian for 'white'.
Gelida - Italian for 'cold'.
"Luc Diaboli"
Luc - of course is a French male's name.
Diaboli - Latin for 'devil'.
Just mentoning that in case the information might be useful to upcoming writers. |
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 0:35:16 GMT
This is just a thought or two on Jeff Beaumont and 'the Gift'....
1. It is sooo cool that we have no idea if he will open the gift or not,
or WHEN if he does!
2. I've thought more about Luc Diaboli saying :
"That offender has one chance to amend his errors."
I just wonder if Beaumont is a good enough man to be true to his word,
when he said that he too would act 'fairly and honestly',
as he told Diaboli he would?
I just wonder...will he open it, as he has been told to more than once,
And possibly 'attain his just wages' whether they be good or bad?
Could the decision to OPEN the package, though he be fearful, be that 'one chance'?
I am SO LOOKING FORWARD to whatever comes next, in the following chapters.
Bianca - Italian for 'white'.
Gelida - Italian for 'cold'."Luc Diaboli"Luc - of course is a French male's name.Diaboli - Latin for 'devil'.Just mentoning that in case the information might be useful to upcoming writers. ....
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Post by Tanith on Oct 30, 2022 12:36:45 GMT
Love love love your chapter, Madam Wolf! Suspenseful and intriguing!
"The Gift", given how the story is unfolding, seems like a perfectly appropriate title for me. My two coppers.
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 15:20:12 GMT
Love love love your chapter, Madam Wolf! Suspenseful and intriguing!
"The Gift", given how the story is unfolding, seems like a perfectly appropriate title for me. My two coppers.
Man, Cap gave me awfully good stuff to work with.
Good news guys!
diobolic Dio is doing better,
(though still terribly busy)
and he got Chapter 3 to me this morning!
Thank you, Dio!
I will get right onto editing,
and have it posted for you asap.
(Tanith , shall I have your muse's black leather tack sent out for polishing?😄😉)
edwardjohn
darkharbinger
docpain2
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 15:23:13 GMT
Love love love your chapter, Madam Wolf! Suspenseful and intriguing!
"The Gift", given how the story is unfolding, seems like a perfectly appropriate title for me. My two coppers.
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 19:08:37 GMT
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 30, 2022 20:32:06 GMT
I liked that chapter a lot, Dio!
I guess I'm up to bat.
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 20:33:46 GMT
I liked that chapter a lot, Dio!
I guess I'm up to bat. |
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 30, 2022 20:35:23 GMT
I liked that chapter a lot, Dio!
I guess I'm up to bat. |
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Post by wolf on Oct 30, 2022 20:37:19 GMT
No. Sorry kiddo. Tanith is up next. 🙂
The schedule is at the top of this page. |
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Post by Tanith on Oct 30, 2022 23:10:19 GMT
Love love love your chapter, Madam Wolf! Suspenseful and intriguing!
"The Gift", given how the story is unfolding, seems like a perfectly appropriate title for me. My two coppers.
Man, Cap gave me awfully good stuff to work with.
Good news guys!
diobolic Dio is doing better,
(though still terribly busy)
and he got Chapter 3 to me this morning!
Thank you, Dio!
I will get right onto editing,
and have it posted for you asap.
(Tanith , shall I have your muse's black leather tack sent out for polishing?😄😉)
edwardjohn
darkharbinger
docpain2
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Post by wolf on Oct 31, 2022 13:47:07 GMT
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Post by Tanith on Oct 31, 2022 15:50:28 GMT
Ooooh, I'm starting to get excited...
...what are you all staring at? I was talking about the story, ya buncha... 
Seriously, though...I see we have a maximum word count set, Madam Wolf...how about a minimum? I want to be sure of staying in range...
...of the word count! Stop giggling! (rofl)
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Post by wolf on Oct 31, 2022 16:22:58 GMT
🤣😂
It's fine to go under 1,500.
Hmm...950 minimum sound okay?
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Post by diobolic on Oct 31, 2022 16:28:18 GMT
Finally got some time to comment on what was written so far. Great beginning docpain2 and giving us something we all can build upon. Also excellent followup wolf. I like what you did and it got my creative juices flowing as I ran with some of the ideas you came up with.
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Post by diobolic on Oct 31, 2022 16:31:55 GMT
🤣😂
It's fine to go under 1,500.
Hmm...950 minimum sound okay?  |
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Post by wolf on Oct 31, 2022 16:36:28 GMT
Finally got some time to comment on what was written so far. Great beginning docpain2 and giving us something we all can build upon. Also excellent followup wolf . I like what you did and it got my creative juices flowing as I ran with some of the ideas you came up with.
I think both you guys have great work!
Really looking forward to the next chapters!
While I have YOU here,
are you interested in writing a part of the epilogue? |
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