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Post by docpain2 on Oct 24, 2022 10:35:29 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2022 19:02:59 GMT
Alright, I'm almost done editing chapter 2, and will post it soon.
Cap has given us a GREAT, and appropriately intricate story.
I have decided to change the rules a bit, Every writer now gets :
1,500 words each.
I think we all may need more than 950 for mid chapters.
I have done my damnedest to get Chapter 2 down to 950 words, from something like 1,392.
But I can't reword, trim or sculpt it down any more, without losing important information. I'm somewhere a little below 1,288.
My apologies to everyone, please forgive me.
diobolic Tanith darkharbinger edwardjohn docpain2
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 24, 2022 19:19:48 GMT
Alright, I'm almost done editing chapter 2, and will post it soon.
Cap has given us a GREAT, and appropriately intricate story.
I have decided to change the rules a bit, Every writer now gets :
1,500 words each.
I think we all may need more than 950 for mid chapters.
I have done my damnedest to get Chapter 2 down to 950 words, from something like 1,392.
But I can't reword, trim or sculpt it down any more, without losing important information. I'm somewhere a little below 1,288.
My apologies to everyone, please forgive me.
diobolic Tanith darkharbinger edwardjohn docpain2
The word count ain't a problem with me, Wolf! Keep the story comin'!
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2022 20:18:32 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2022 20:44:57 GMT
Alright, I'm almost done editing chapter 2, and will post it soon.
Cap has given us a GREAT, and appropriately intricate story.
I have decided to change the rules a bit, Every writer now gets :
1,500 words each.
I think we all may need more than 950 for mid chapters.
I have done my damnedest to get Chapter 2 down to 950 words, from something like 1,392.
But I can't reword, trim or sculpt it down any more, without losing important information. I'm somewhere a little below 1,288.
My apologies to everyone, please forgive me.
diobolic Tanith darkharbinger edwardjohn docpain2
The word count ain't a problem with me, Wolf! Keep the story comin'! Thanks Edders.
It's just that, I'm not suddenly changing the rules for selfish reasons.
If it had been any other 2nd writer, I would have made the same decision.
I think this involved tale warrants it.
....and if I had kept on cutting things out, and rewording, my chapter just would not have been good at all. And not enjoyable to read.
I hope chapter 2 is enjoyable, did my best to make it good for you guys.
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2022 21:36:18 GMT
I'm starting to think about title suggestions...
"Jeff's Gift" ?
"Jeffrey Beaumont's Gift" ?
"The Gift" ?
"Gifted" ?
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 25, 2022 10:20:19 GMT
Outstanding! There are still a million directions this can go!
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 25, 2022 10:20:49 GMT
I'm starting to think about title suggestions...
"Jeff's Gift" ?
"Jeffrey Beaumont's Gift" ?
"The Gift" ?
"Gifted" ?
I like "The Gift."
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 11:44:44 GMT
Outstanding! There are still a million directions this can go! Thanks Cap Good morning...coffee...waking up...
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 13:18:13 GMT
I'm starting to think about title suggestions...
"Jeff's Gift" ?
"Jeffrey Beaumont's Gift" ?
"The Gift" ?
"Gifted" ?
I like "The Gift." Got it.
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2022 15:29:08 GMT
That was a thrilling chapter, wolf , great job.
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 15:37:28 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 16:32:57 GMT
I heard from diobolic Dio.
He's still got a nagging cold, and isn't feeling good at all. He'll be back and catch up with us as soon as he can.
Take it easy, and get better soon, Dio! 🙏
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2022 16:36:18 GMT
I head from diobolic Dio.
He's still got a nagging cold, and isn't feeling good at all. He'll be back and catch up with us as soon as he can.
Take it easy, and get better soon, Dio! 🙏
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 25, 2022 17:15:42 GMT
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 25, 2022 17:24:16 GMT
Very enjoyable chapter, Wolf!
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 17:33:31 GMT
If you go to the top of this page and click : "The Christmas Story 2022" you will be taken to the section that has both these hidden threads.
It's the same way all over the board, every section. 'Tv and movies', 'Chattery teeth'...etc...
If you go to 'Actions' at the top of a thread's page, and bookmark the thread, you will get notifications whenever there is a new post, even if you haven't been quoted or tagged.
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 17:34:03 GMT
Very enjoyable chapter, Wolf! Thank you!
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Post by edwardjohn on Oct 25, 2022 17:46:12 GMT
If you go to the top of this page and click : "The Christmas Story 2022" you will be taken to the section that has both these hidden threads.
It's the same way all over the board, every section. 'Tv and movies', 'Chattery teeth'...etc...
If you go to 'Actions' at the top of a thread's page, and bookmark the thread, you will get notifications whenever there is a new post, even if you haven't been quoted or tagged. Ah, gotch you!
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 17:59:36 GMT
If you go to the top of this page and click : "The Christmas Story 2022" you will be taken to the section that has both these hidden threads.
It's the same way all over the board, every section. 'Tv and movies', 'Chattery teeth'...etc...
If you go to 'Actions' at the top of a thread's page, and bookmark the thread, you will get notifications whenever there is a new post, even if you haven't been quoted or tagged. Ah, gotch you! 🙂
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