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Post by osnafrank on Oct 24, 2021 15:25:49 GMT
hallow02 Well, wasn't this an awesome beginning ?!? applouse
Great job darkharbinger
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 24, 2021 15:37:31 GMT
Thank you I was nervous when I started it, I am glad you enjoyed it
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2021 15:37:50 GMT
It's finally here! bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb And JB darkharbinger has done such a fine job of kick starting everything with Chapter 1 ! Thank you JB! WUITIIQGUyMrvFxIgkNw Love your writing my friend, GREAT work. From the get go, we have mystery, suspense, gore and so much more! Loving these characters you've given to us too! 😄
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Post by Dizzy on Oct 24, 2021 15:41:40 GMT
I Will Check It Out Soon When I Feel Better but I already Know darkharbinger Did Great No Worries My friend olfEOEbpO0rxuamBULVg
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Post by diobolic on Oct 24, 2021 16:24:11 GMT
Good job darkharbinger, and excellent start. You laid down interesting characters and a setting the writers could run with.
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2021 16:35:20 GMT
Thank you I was nervous when I started it, I am glad you enjoyed it Good job darkharbinger , and excellent start. You laid down interesting characters and a setting the writers could run with. Yes he did, Dio! A great 'team in mind' piece!
You had nothing to be nervous about JB. You gave us an awesome setting, characters and circumstances to work with!😄
And Dio! Your cover, you made for us, is so beautiful. And I love that 'sidewalk' illustration you came up with too! Really outstanding works. 😄
And Commander osnafrank , thank you again for giving us this place and making it all possible! 😄
You guys are wonderful! applouse
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Post by wolf on Oct 24, 2021 16:53:47 GMT
Here is just ONE of my favorite lines from Chapter1, JB darkharbinger 😄 :
"Blood, guts, and body parts Jerimiah had no name for were strewn across the ground like discarded candy wrappers from a Halloween party."
Just totally awesome, dude! applouse halloween-smiley26
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 25, 2021 2:24:50 GMT
lol if i'm lowed to quote myself my fave line was the one about "Sometimes walking the dog isn't that relaxing" lol
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2021 14:52:29 GMT
lol if i'm lowed to quote myself my fave line was the one about "Sometimes walking the dog isn't that relaxing" lol Lol, of course you're allowed JB! I liked that line too 😄 applouse
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2021 15:15:47 GMT
Holy moly, new twists and turns and guardian werewolves !
Great job wolfie, i enjoyed that chapter.
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Post by Wicked Esther on Oct 25, 2021 15:16:06 GMT
I just read the first two parts - c029 I can’t wait to read more. Well done, guys. 👏😎
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Post by spideyman on Oct 25, 2021 15:20:38 GMT
Already a winner of a story. darkharbinger-- what an introduction. Hooked for sure.
wolf-- keeping up the pace and drawing this reader in even more.
Great job, writers....
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Post by diobolic on Oct 25, 2021 15:58:02 GMT
Very good wolf. Loved the new characters and the twist to the story line. applouse
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2021 16:09:38 GMT
Holy moly, new twists and turns and guardian werewolves !
Great job wolfie, i enjoyed that chapter. I just read the first two parts - I can’t wait to read more. Well done, guys. 👏😎 Already a winner of a story. darkharbinger -- what an introduction. Hooked for sure.
wolf -- keeping up the pace and drawing this reader in even more.
Great job, writers.... Very good wolf . Loved the new characters and the twist to the story line. Thank you all so much! Really so happy you are enjoying it!
I am so proud of all these awesome guys, and their good, hard work and wonderful creative writing!
JB really gave us such a great start, and various directions to go in.
All I can say is that gets better! applouse
Later when I have time, I'll post more here about our FANTASTIC illustrations Dio has come up with for us, and about some other little perks for you all, that the guys all got together on.😄
There are still a couple of more little 'Bonus Surprises' to come later too! But not going to talk about them yet. 😊😋🐺😉
Happy Halloween! bokoebaFTerAfwUuywKb
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 25, 2021 18:16:47 GMT
I just opened the door, you guys came in and made it a party! I love how the story turned out
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2021 19:10:18 GMT
I just opened the door, you guys came in and made it a party! I love how the story turned out JB, I know for me, you opened up the door to a wonderland of possibilities!
Some of us writers wanted to see a more traditional old style werewolf (or werewolveS) story, and some wanted to see a modern type tale. You admirably laid the ground for us to go either and every way, and take it where we would!😄 You said "Werewolves are my thing." And yes sir they are! applouse
Some suggested the werewolf could be a hero in the story, others said it might be nice to have a romantic element.
I simply kept those things in mind when I devised my Chapter 2. And man, I did have fun dreaming that up, and loved every breadcrumb you left for me to pick up on! Thank you again. 😊
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Post by Danielle on Oct 26, 2021 15:48:16 GMT
Great story so far everyone i'm impressed. Will have to check back in here soon and see the rest.
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2021 16:02:42 GMT
Great story so far everyone i'm impressed. Will have to check back in here soon and see the rest. Thank you, Danielle! applouse
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 26, 2021 16:27:35 GMT
Awesome chapter diobolic, loved it. applouse
Loved the deranged Lord.
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Post by diobolic on Oct 26, 2021 17:40:15 GMT
Thanks Frank... I modeled him after myself. (rofl)
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