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Try 1
Nov 18, 2024 22:20:47 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 18, 2024 22:20:47 GMT
My wristband woke me up.
"Good morning, Jake, it's 7 am, June, 22nd, 2087"
"Good morning, Steffie"
"Don't forget to brush your teeth.
And you're the science officer of this ship."
"Thank you Steffie"
"I'm important, i have an assignment."
"Yes, just wear your wristband, i'm here.
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Try 1
Nov 19, 2024 12:04:20 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 19, 2024 12:04:20 GMT
My wristband woke me up.
"Good morning, Jake, it's 7 am, June, 22nd, 2087"
"Good morning, Steffie"
"Don't forget to brush your teeth.
And you're the science officer of this ship."
"Thank you Steffie"
"I'm important, i have an assignment."
"Yes, just wear your wristband, i'm here.
(Frank, if I’m wrong about what I think this thread is for, Sorry.
Educate me and delete my interferences, please.😊)
I was just playing around,
tried to start some kind of scifi story. 
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Post by wolf on Nov 19, 2024 15:15:37 GMT
(Frank, if I’m wrong about what I think this thread is for, Sorry.
Educate me and delete my interferences, please.😊)
I was just playing around,
tried to start some kind of scifi story.
What is “Try 1”?
The title?
…I thought maybe it was a prompt. 🙂
(write more!…whenever you’re ready, and feel like it. 😊)
…I got the feeling Jake is a lone on the ship, and has been for a long time. But why? Where did everyone go? 😳 He’s got Steffi and a few stupid droids…. Maybe. 😊   |
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Try 1
Nov 19, 2024 16:30:27 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 19, 2024 16:30:27 GMT
I was just playing around,
tried to start some kind of scifi story.
What is “Try 1”?
The title?
…I thought maybe it was a prompt. 🙂
(write more!…whenever you’re ready, and feel like it. 😊)
…I got the feeling Jake is a lone on the ship, and has been for a long time. But why? Where did everyone go? 😳 He’s got Steffi and a few stupid droids…. Maybe. 😊 
It's not the name of the story.
"Steffie" isn't a person/robot.
It's a 3D Holograph AI, "living" in his wristband. |
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Post by wolf on Nov 19, 2024 17:05:04 GMT
I like it! Keep on!
What is “Try 1”?
The title?
…I thought maybe it was a prompt. 🙂
(write more!…whenever you’re ready, and feel like it. 😊)
…I got the feeling Jake is a lone on the ship, and has been for a long time. But why? Where did everyone go? 😳 He’s got Steffi and a few stupid droids…. Maybe. 😊
It's not the name of the story.
"Steffie" isn't a person/robot.
It's a 3D Holograph AI, "living" in his wristband.
I like how she reminds Jake to brush his teeth, and who/what he is on the ship. 😄
…. Her doing that makes me wonder if Jake might be a little inclined to lose it, a little….some days…maybe. 😊 |
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Try 1
Nov 19, 2024 17:11:04 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 19, 2024 17:11:04 GMT
Didn't know how to name the thread.
It's not the name of the story.
"Steffie" isn't a person/robot.
It's a 3D Holograph AI, "living" in his wristband.
I like how she reminds Jake to brush his teeth, and who/what he is on the ship. 😄
…. Her doing that makes me wonder if Jake might be a little inclined to lose it, a little….some days…maybe. 😊 Yap, i imagined him with some kind of Asperger. Please don't ask me why, i don't know, wolfie.  |
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Post by wolf on Nov 19, 2024 20:05:59 GMT
Yeah, I got that about Steffie, and the wrist band, and she is always with him. These are very interesting characters! More please! 😄👏👏👏
I like how she reminds Jake to brush his teeth, and who/what he is on the ship. 😄
…. Her doing that makes me wonder if Jake might be a little inclined to lose it, a little….some days…maybe. 😊 Yap, i imagined him with some kind of Asperger. Please don't ask me why, i don't know, wolfie. Run with it!  |
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Post by wolf on Nov 25, 2024 14:45:38 GMT
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Try 1
Nov 25, 2024 16:08:46 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 25, 2024 16:08:46 GMT
Writers Block |
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Post by wolf on Nov 25, 2024 16:42:43 GMT
Writers Block …Oscar! Get the mouse and Jack. 😊 |
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Try 1
Nov 25, 2024 16:44:58 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 25, 2024 16:44:58 GMT
Writers Block …Oscar! Get the mouse and Jack. 😊  |
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Try 1
Nov 25, 2024 20:55:29 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 25, 2024 20:55:29 GMT
He took a shower, and brushed his teeth.
"f******g Idiots", he thought,
"there's nothing than 0,5 mm between us and the cold, dead space."
They put us on a vessel, with a propulsion system, even our scientist don't understand,
and here we are, beyond our solar system.
Gawd, even Andromeda is now closer than Earth.
I'm pissed, i don't wanna be here,
but they said it's important, that they need me.
But why ?
I hate the space, i hate to be here in this Prison,
penned in with these...i i'm not going to call them Idiots....but they are.
I know they don't like me, except this engineer (he really understands FTL and also Wormhole drives).
Do i care ? f**k, No!
"Meeting with the commanding officers at 8:30
In the Captain's Ready Room."
"Thanks for the reminder"
"Welcome, but please, don't be mad at me"
"I'm not, what made you think that?"
"Well, your Blood pressure has increased, your Adrenaline ...."
"sorry, Steff."
"20 minutes til the meeting"
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"Welcome everyone to the Security Meeting.
I see some familiar faces here.
You,the guy in the black suit, i haven't seen you before,
are you sure you are....oops, sorry.
In 2058, our company has sent out a probe.
The goal was...
"To find something to exploit...or green sex slaves."
Steffie shocked me with a light electric impulse.
"Well, no.
But to find Earth like Planets.
Well, we did, and we did find a spaceship...ate least we think it's a ship.
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Post by wolf on Nov 25, 2024 21:07:22 GMT
🤣…Ohmygod, I love this Frank! I think I’m in love with Jake! This guy is great 😂👏👏👏
More please! Can’t wait to see what comes next.
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Try 1
Nov 25, 2024 22:04:47 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Nov 25, 2024 22:04:47 GMT
🤣…Ohmygod, I love this Frank! I think I’m in love with Jake! This guy is great 😂👏👏👏
More please! Can’t wait to see what comes next. 
Wow.... |
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Try 1
Nov 25, 2024 22:09:41 GMT
Post by wolf on Nov 25, 2024 22:09:41 GMT
🤣…Ohmygod, I love this Frank! I think I’m in love with Jake! This guy is great 😂👏👏👏
More please! Can’t wait to see what comes next.
Wow.... |
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Post by wolf on Nov 26, 2024 14:54:12 GMT
🤣…Ohmygod, I love this Frank! I think I’m in love with Jake! This guy is great 😂👏👏👏
More please! Can’t wait to see what comes next.
Wow.... Gotta love how Steffi shocked his wrist.  One of those helpful reminders 😂👏👏👏 |
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