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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2024 15:16:07 GMT
Hocus pocus, osnafrank, you brought just the right elements to this Halloween story. Great writing style. Way to go!!  |
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2024 16:34:45 GMT
A thrilling addition to the story, docpain2, excellent chapter. 
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Post by docpain2 on Oct 25, 2024 17:35:06 GMT
A thrilling addition to the story, docpain2 , excellent chapter. Thank you! |
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Post by spideyman on Oct 25, 2024 18:12:30 GMT
Your "Halloween Spell" has been cast in the next installment. Way to go,docpain2.
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2024 1:21:55 GMT
A thrilling addition to the story, docpain2 , excellent chapter. Thank you! 
I liked the horrendous state the body was found in.
Lol, ‘flayed’ and while he was still alive too, I bet. 😊
We’ve got a great story with great action and cliffhanging going on! |
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2024 14:49:08 GMT
prufrock21
Surprises, suspense and more mystery! Great chapter Pruf, and great to have back with us this year
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Post by spideyman on Oct 26, 2024 15:17:02 GMT
Chilling and ghostly words are brought by prufrock21. The story becomes more suspenseful. Good job!!
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 26, 2024 15:54:46 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2024 14:05:17 GMT
docpain2
Another great chapter, Cap!
Love all these cops, and the mysterious back story that’s emerging.😄
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Post by spideyman on Oct 27, 2024 14:57:34 GMT
Instead of carving a pumpkin, docpain2, carves up another "section" of our Halloween story. Excellent job.
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 27, 2024 16:29:10 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2024 20:18:25 GMT
I talked to my mom earlier, and she says the story is great and looks forward to reading more, and ‘excellent work everyone’.
I pass the chapters on to her, and she reads when she has got a minute to. 🙂
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Post by spideyman on Oct 28, 2024 13:57:44 GMT
Cobwebs on the corners of the page, wolf adds an exciting part to the story. Funtastic!
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2024 14:27:20 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 28, 2024 16:28:01 GMT
Excellent, thrilling chapter, wolfie, great job.
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2024 16:59:47 GMT
Excellent, thrilling chapter, wolfie, great job. |
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Post by spideyman on Oct 29, 2024 15:41:08 GMT
Skeletons in the closet come out to play as darkharbinger adds his part to the Halloween story! Good job.
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 29, 2024 16:24:30 GMT
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 29, 2024 22:41:46 GMT
glad you all liked it
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Post by wolf on Oct 29, 2024 23:53:06 GMT
Ozzie? Harriet? 😆😂
Awesome chapter all around JB!
Excellent stuff, man.
Oooo! And that cliffhanger, the suspense! 😄
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