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Post by edwardjohn on Sept 4, 2023 20:55:02 GMT
Great Chapter,edwardjohn , excellent Job.
I really like Connors and Paul Thanks a lot Frank!
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Post by docpain2 on Sept 5, 2023 10:37:11 GMT
edwardjohn and Tanith, I just read both chapters.
Wow! Great work by both of you!
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Post by Tanith on Sept 5, 2023 11:19:55 GMT
Love it, edwardjohn! With names like "Detective Carter" and "Vince Gilligant" I think I can hazard a guess as to where your inspiration is coming from. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
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Post by edwardjohn on Sept 5, 2023 12:39:48 GMT
Love it, edwardjohn ! With names like "Detective Carter" and "Vince Gilligant" I think I can hazard a guess as to where your inspiration is coming from. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Ah, I know what you're getting at! I do know both X-Files and Breaking Bad (Vince Gilligan also working on X-Files), but this was totally subconscious! And many thanks. I did plan on getting back to the book store, that bit at the crime scene was solely meant to be half of the 1,500 words, but it just kept getting more comprehensive.
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Post by edwardjohn on Sept 5, 2023 12:40:05 GMT
edwardjohn and Tanith , I just read both chapters.
Wow! Great work by both of you! Many thank, Doc!
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Post by wolf on Sept 5, 2023 13:38:57 GMT
Working on Chapter 3 guys, I’ll have it done today. Or tomorrow at the latest.
Just checking in. Everyone have a great day! 🙂
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Post by wolf on Sept 6, 2023 15:42:42 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂
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Post by edwardjohn on Sept 6, 2023 16:05:34 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 I like the chapter, Wolf! I'm good, but thanks for asking, Wolf!
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Post by wolf on Sept 6, 2023 16:16:54 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 I like the chapter, Wolf! I'm good, but thanks for asking, Wolf! Okay, got it kiddo. 🙂 Thank you, I loved your chapter, and Tanith’s chapter.
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Post by osnafrank on Sept 6, 2023 16:52:12 GMT
Excellent chapter,wolf , great work. Really enjoyed it.
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Post by wolf on Sept 6, 2023 17:07:00 GMT
Excellent chapter,wolf , great work. Really enjoyed it. Thank you, Frank! Did the best I could.
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Post by darkharbinger on Sept 7, 2023 0:30:51 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 yes ma'am
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Post by wolf on Sept 7, 2023 1:05:48 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 yes ma'am 😊
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Post by docpain2 on Sept 7, 2023 8:20:16 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 You have a fabulous day too
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Post by docpain2 on Sept 7, 2023 8:34:00 GMT
wolf Outstanding work!
I love the asylum angle!
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Post by wolf on Sept 7, 2023 10:35:52 GMT
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Post by Tanith on Sept 7, 2023 13:49:03 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 Loving it, wolf! This story is taking off in an awesome (and beautifully gruesome) direction!
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Post by wolf on Sept 7, 2023 14:02:44 GMT
Chapter 3 is posted now.
I hope y’all like it. I had wonderful characters and details to work with!
Sorry that it took me so long to get it done, I had to trim a lot to keep it 1500 words.
JB darkharbinger , you’re up to write Chapter 4! You’ve got 4 days. 😊
Everyone have a great day. 😊
Tanith edwardjohn docpain2
Edders, we’re still ahead of schedule and have a pretty involved tale going on. If you change your mind about writing a 2nd chapter, just let me know before I am up to write chapter 7 and I’ll fit you in. If you prefer not to, that’s fine too. 🙂 Loving it, wolf! This story is taking off in an awesome (and beautifully gruesome) direction!
Thank you, Tanith! 😊
Man, I tell you what, you’ve got good timing! I just now got an idea for an epilogue, that 2 or more writers can participate in.
{But not the same way as last year’s X-Mas story epilogue(s) were done.}
I’ll think on it some more, and see what happens in JB darkharbinger ‘s and Cap docpain2 ‘s chapters. Then I’ll bring my vision to the group.
Lol, it might turn out to be one of my less terrible ideas. 😂
I agree that this tale is getting awesome! 😄
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Post by wolf on Sept 8, 2023 9:50:33 GMT
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Post by darkharbinger on Sept 9, 2023 1:25:47 GMT
Chapter is in your inbox, madam
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