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Post by osnafrank on Dec 18, 2022 16:06:13 GMT
Excellent first Chapter. 
Great Job,docpain2 
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Post by wolf on Dec 18, 2022 17:59:58 GMT
We have an absolutely wonderful start to our
'very different and suspenseful'
story this year! 
EXCELLENT work on this tremendous 1st Chapter, docpain2 ! 
I love these characters, the settings and building intrigue.
Thank you, Captain America. 😄 
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Post by spideyman on Dec 18, 2022 19:12:08 GMT
You have me hooked,docpain2. Excellent intro to the story.
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Post by docpain2 on Dec 19, 2022 13:40:08 GMT
You have me hooked,docpain2 . Excellent intro to the story. |
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Post by docpain2 on Dec 19, 2022 13:40:32 GMT
Excellent first Chapter.
Great Job,docpain2 Thank you. |
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Post by docpain2 on Dec 19, 2022 13:41:41 GMT
You're VERY welcome!!
I love doing these things.
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Post by osnafrank on Dec 19, 2022 16:51:14 GMT
Great Job, wolf.
A very suspenseful, enjoyable chapter.
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Post by wolf on Dec 19, 2022 16:59:10 GMT
Great Job, wolf .
A very suspenseful, enjoyable chapter.
Very happy you liked it.  |
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Post by wolf on Dec 19, 2022 17:12:28 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Dec 20, 2022 16:07:06 GMT
Excellent work on this terrific chapter , diobolic
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Post by wolf on Dec 20, 2022 17:03:09 GMT
Wonderful Chapter 3 diobolic !
You've done a marvelous job here,
with the detective and all the disturbing details.
The mystery escalates! 
Love your chapter.
Thank you, Dio!
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Post by osnafrank on Dec 21, 2022 16:15:10 GMT
Marvelous job, Tanith.
Suspenseful chapter and the casserole sounds delicious. 
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Post by spideyman on Dec 21, 2022 16:54:16 GMT
Catching up on the story....
wolf-- great addition. You have the muse fro writing.
diobolic-- continued suspense. Writing brings out your talents.
Tanith-- fabulous addition.
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Post by wolf on Dec 21, 2022 18:27:06 GMT
Catching up on the story....
wolf -- great addition. You have the muse fro writing.
diobolic -- continued suspense. Writing brings out your talents.
Tanith -- fabulous addition.
Lol, a muse or two have been known to show up
and hang out on the patio with me...sometimes. 🙂 
Cap docpain2 has certainly given us GREAT stuff to work, and run, with!
I think all of our stories since 2020 have been wonderful, and this more unique volume, is one of the very best.
I love Tanith 's pick up and follow from diobolic Dio's excellent chapter!
(really enjoyed visualizing the M.E. and Detective and what you described, Dio.)
Tanith, your Chapter 4 is amazing! You really brought us goood gory 'freak you out' details, with that casserole! Genius bit there.
Lol, we needed some really icky gooshy stuff!
And gotta love the added mystery and intrigue Bianca was into.
Thank you! |
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Post by Tanith on Dec 21, 2022 23:05:44 GMT
Catching up on the story....
wolf -- great addition. You have the muse fro writing.
diobolic -- continued suspense. Writing brings out your talents.
Tanith -- fabulous addition.
Lol, a muse or two have been known to show up
and hang out on the patio with me...sometimes. 🙂 
Cap docpain2 has certainly given us GREAT stuff to work, and run, with!
I think all of our stories since 2020 have been wonderful, and this more unique volume, is one of the very best.
I love Tanith 's pick up and follow from diobolic Dio's excellent chapter!
(really enjoyed visualizing the M.E. and Detective and what you described, Dio.)
Tanith, your Chapter 4 is amazing! You really brought us goood gory 'freak you out' details, with that casserole! Genius bit there.
Lol, we needed some really icky gooshy stuff!
And gotta love the added mystery and intrigue Bianca was into.
Thank you!
Oh! It's a pleasure, Madam Wolf. Thank you for inviting me along for the ride.
So your muse stays on the patio, eh? Funny, mine keeps wandering around looking for places to hang mistletoe...
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Post by wolf on Dec 21, 2022 23:40:20 GMT
Thank you Lady, very generous.
Lol, a muse or two have been known to show up
and hang out on the patio with me...sometimes. 🙂
Cap docpain2 has certainly given us GREAT stuff to work, and run, with!
I think all of our stories since 2020 have been wonderful, and this more unique volume, is one of the very best.
I love Tanith 's pick up and follow from diobolic Dio's excellent chapter!
(really enjoyed visualizing the M.E. and Detective and what you described, Dio.)
Tanith, your Chapter 4 is amazing! You really brought us goood gory 'freak you out' details, with that casserole! Genius bit there.
Lol, we needed some really icky gooshy stuff!
And gotta love the added mystery and intrigue Bianca was into.
Thank you!
Oh! It's a pleasure, Madam Wolf. Thank you for inviting me along for the ride.
So your muse stays on the patio, eh? Funny, mine keeps wandering around looking for places to hang mistletoe...
You're welcome!
It's really edifying having you work with us,
and getting to enjoy your interesting writing. 🙂 |
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Post by osnafrank on Dec 22, 2022 16:35:10 GMT
Excellent Job, edwardjohn
Sandy....she's a monster. 
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Post by edwardjohn on Dec 22, 2022 17:11:18 GMT
Excellent Job, edwardjohn
Sandy....she's a monster. |
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Post by wolf on Dec 22, 2022 17:41:22 GMT
Ohhh edwardjohn !
Chapter 5 is totally flamin' AWESOME.
Exciting surprises and action, and great explanations.
NICE way to start tightening things up for last Chapter 6.
Well done, my friend
Thank you kiddo!
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Post by edwardjohn on Dec 22, 2022 22:31:05 GMT
Ohhh edwardjohn !
Chapter 5 is totally flamin' AWESOME.
Exciting surprises and action, and great explanations.
NICE way to start tightening things up for last Chapter 6.
Well done, my friend
Thank you kiddo! |
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