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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2022 15:05:39 GMT
Well well well, that was a great start.  
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Post by spideyman on Oct 25, 2022 15:42:24 GMT
Wow factor building. Great start!
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 19:29:52 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 20:04:00 GMT
Just a Note  ....
Lady spideyman and Commander osnafrank ,the character "Francois" is dedicated to Frank with great gratitude, love and appreciationfor creating our Ka-tet Playground, and making all of this possible.And also to his SO inspiring, fortuitous and hilarious TYPO : "Hidden Boars". 😄   As always, every year it MUST be said : THANK YOU for all you do, Frank!  OsnafrankPublishing
LTD.
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2022 20:07:46 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 25, 2022 20:12:11 GMT
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 25, 2022 20:15:56 GMT
Prost wolfie  
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 26, 2022 16:38:10 GMT
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 26, 2022 16:42:04 GMT
danke schon
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Post by wolf on Oct 26, 2022 17:04:02 GMT
Hey JB darkharbinger !
Wonderful Chapter 1
Thank you!
I love this whole story,
but this is definitely
one of my favorite parts.
"Werewolves" ARE your thing!
And I love how you made Armand a
"Genetically altered/enhanced HYBRID" creature,
and not a traditional werewolf like we had last year.
Awesome stroke of genius. 😄🖋
And "Operation Lazarus"! 
The mood of the scene and the characters, plus their conversation is PERFECT.
You took the chaotic Traxim setting
into a deeper, 'still quieter and calmer' place in the facility,
before all hell broke loose there too.
And brought a fantastic and clearly defined sense of 'calm cool collected urgency', I think.
..... definitely hungry for more story now! 🐺
I also like the way you get the feeling there might be
a bit of a 'love/hate friendship' going on underneath it all too.
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Post by spideyman on Oct 26, 2022 20:41:25 GMT
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 27, 2022 5:03:05 GMT
Thank you all for the kind words, I am glad you liked it |
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Post by darkharbinger on Oct 27, 2022 14:44:18 GMT
"Werewolves" ARE your thing!
And "Operation Lazarus"!
werewolves always have kinda been, even the nontraditional ones and yeah I was proud of Operation Lazarus also |
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2022 16:49:42 GMT
Thank you all for the kind words, I am glad you liked it
"Werewolves" ARE your thing!
And "Operation Lazarus"!
werewolves always have kinda been, even the nontraditional ones and yeah I was proud of Operation Lazarus also
And be proud of all of your excellent work! |
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Post by osnafrank on Oct 27, 2022 17:49:34 GMT
Excellent work prufrock21 
Enjoyed the conversation between Roux and Armand.
What a great Story.
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2022 18:38:36 GMT
And prufrock21 's Chapter 2 is up!
Excellent work, senor!
Thank you for this great addition!
Mmmm!.... The plot thickens,
and the plan twists, shifts,
turns and is thoroughly laid out.
Awesome stuff.
 "They're gonna do WHAT to me!?"
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Post by wolf on Oct 27, 2022 23:44:01 GMT
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Post by Dizzy on Oct 28, 2022 13:20:18 GMT
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Post by wolf on Oct 28, 2022 16:04:19 GMT
I'm happy you're enjoying it, sis.
I was thinking of you when I was writing the prologue.
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Post by Dizzy on Oct 28, 2022 17:01:19 GMT
I'm happy you're enjoying it, sis.
I was thinking of you when I was writing the prologue. |
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Thankee greatly, Sai's. 🙂
